THE GREEN WILLOW By: Dyan Ratna Hayuningtyas (Finalis LCP Batch 3)

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Amidst this neverending winter,

The glorious realms of mine in shatter,

The flimsy glee hath slivered for thee,

O’ love, you slaughtered all souls in me,

Thy reaped the paint into pieces beneath wintry river,

Thereafter you conquered me to surrender,

I whined and whined within excruciating queer,

I wept and wept, I suffered upon a woe that queer,

From the tense of frozen moon, I remained in silent,

Night by night, I pondered of you that now in Aidenn,

This soul and flesh hath fainted down a dread remorse,

That may corrupt and destroy all blood of me in worse,

O’ dear, I was possessed by the miserable gloom,

That restrained the green willows around to bloom,

After thee, my love and my heart of life, gone forever,

I seized alone this sweet grief of agony upon my shoulder.


Cibinong, December 12th, 2021



Author Biodata

Dyan Ratna Hayuningtyas is a student from the University of Yogyakarta. Writing is her hobby, she started writing as early as in her middle school age. Her house is located in Nirwana Estate’s Street RR No. 9, Cibinong, Bogor. Her acquaintances called her by Dyan on daily basis. Dyan can be reached through email tyashoka@gmail.com, Whatsapp 085772044572 or Instagram @tyasoka.

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غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 9:35 م Delete
TEMEN GUE MANTUL WEH
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 9:37 م Delete
uwu pisan, dalem ye bund
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 9:38 م Delete
pesen ayam goreng sekilo
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 9:48 م Delete
good job! i love it.
Tita 29‏/3‏/2021، 9:48 م Delete
Keren banget🥰🥰
Unknown 29‏/3‏/2021، 9:55 م Delete
keren banget, semangatt terus yaa! <3
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:00 م Delete
very good, so amazed
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:04 م Delete
Dua ringgit berapa rupiah yan ?
Unknown 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:08 م Delete
soo great, bagus banget puisinya🥺
Unknown 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:11 م Delete
Suka iri sama yang bisa bikin kalimat begini, karena ku masih belajar dan susah banget buat mahamin:(( good luck ka~
Unknown 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:24 م Delete
BAGUS BANGETT AAAA 😭😭 PEMILIHAN DIKSI JUGA BAGUS. KEREN!
Unknown 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:28 م Delete
Semangat ya kakk!!♡
Vie 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:36 م Delete
Good luck bb💞💞
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:39 م Delete
fighting gurl!
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:46 م Delete
aku bingung mau komentar ka, KEREEEEEENNN ABIISSS
khofifahslmh 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:53 م Delete
أزال المؤلف هذا التعليق.
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:53 م Delete
Teruslah bermimpi! Bahagia selalu
del 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:53 م Delete
goodluck! anw ur poetry is soooooo beautiful
khofifahslmh 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:54 م Delete
goodluck and fighting kakk!😍
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:56 م Delete
KAK SUMPAH BAGUS ANED
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:58 م Delete
eaea insecure baca puisinya
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 10:58 م Delete
semoga menang ya, aamiin
sri oktapiani 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:00 م Delete
Good :)
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:01 م Delete
keren amat woy
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:01 م Delete
gk nyangka gue kreatif bgt dyan
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Berjuanglah ^_^
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tanpa kenal lelah ye yan
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Senyum dulu
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Kerupuk kerupuk
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doyoung cakep pisan sist
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:07 م Delete
puisimu sudah bagus, diksi dengan baik. terus kembangkan ide-ide kreatifmu
anonymous 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:08 م Delete
cool!!!
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:08 م Delete
jan pantang menyerah sir
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:09 م Delete
Its so cool! valid no debat
Only 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:10 م Delete
Diksinya keren banget...
Semangat terus, ya!
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:12 م Delete
ULER BERBISA DIATAS PUISI. BENAR-BENAR KEREN INI DIKSI
Unknown 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:12 م Delete
I love your writings so much! it's so well put and neat!! the choice od diction you use in the poem are also very exquisite. the points you wanted to get across are eloquently executed! thank you for making this beautiful piece!! :D
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:13 م Delete
harus menang pokonya ye bro
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:14 م Delete
Diksi ceklis, keselarasan udh oke, ide pun patut diacungkan jempol. Mantav
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:15 م Delete
Terdiam terhanyut membaca puisi anda
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:16 م Delete
Dyan jan lupa bengbeng
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Udh gw blg lo tuh pinter berbahasa
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:19 م Delete
keep spirit!
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:20 م Delete
suer ini keren kak
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:23 م Delete
Baaaguuusss bgt. Sedi bacanya
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:23 م Delete
bobok yan, besok mulung
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:25 م Delete
Mendalami banget! Sungguh keren
minisakura 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:26 م Delete
what a beautiful poetry! good luckk!!
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:26 م Delete
Congratulations sayang
Unknown 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:26 م Delete
what a great poem! nicely written..💭
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:27 م Delete
heeemmm keceh badai
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:28 م Delete
Tumpengan sis
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:29 م Delete
keabisan kata-kata xixixi
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:30 م Delete
Tetap semangat ya. Teruslah berkarya, jan menyerah
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:31 م Delete
A beautifull poem! Oh my god!
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:32 م Delete
SEMANGAT SISTUUURRRR
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:32 م Delete
Bermimpilah setinggi langit, jangan melupakan doa
uknown 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:33 م Delete
so awesome!😭😭😭🥺
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:34 م Delete
Puisinya mengesankan. Salut buat dyan
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:34 م Delete
Bismillahirrahmanirrahim, selalu bahagia sist
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:35 م Delete
Indah sekali puisi ini, sangat menginspirasi saya
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:37 م Delete
WOW IS A MAGIC.
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:38 م Delete
bagi-bagi tips bikin puisi hayuk
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:42 م Delete
manteeppp banget
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nggk ngerti artinya yan
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yagusti ini beneran keren kak
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Mantep benul dy
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:48 م Delete
Aku tunggu karya selanjutnya :>
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:49 م Delete
Jangan lupa senyumnya, jangan cemberut mulu
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:50 م Delete
Berkarya itu indah, seperti puisi yang sedang kubaca :(
Ay 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:53 م Delete
Bagus diksinya semangat yahh semoga menang
Ay 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:54 م Delete
Bagus puisinya semangat yahhh semoga mennag
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:58 م Delete
you're so talented
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:58 م Delete
Its really nice one
غير معرف 29‏/3‏/2021، 11:59 م Delete
So awesome!
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 12:01 ص Delete
SEMANGAT TERUS! MAJU TERUS! JANGAN MUNDUR! JANGAN NYERAH! BERANI MENCOBA! ALRIGHT? FIGHTING
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 12:01 ص Delete
Very sweet ❤️
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:02 ص Delete
Widih dyan daebak keren banget oy
Azzahra A. 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:18 ص Delete
This is amazing! Keep Going, you're the best! Beautiful poetry✨
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:24 ص Delete
Your poetry is beautiful
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:28 ص Delete
niceee!! good luckk
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:28 ص Delete
semangat semangat!
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:29 ص Delete
so nice!!! good job dy
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:29 ص Delete
pasti bisalaahhh menang
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:29 ص Delete
Heran gw kok bisa sih bikin puisi
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nggk boleh kalah sama yg lain yan
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Banyak amat woiii
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:32 ص Delete
Tetap semangat! Slalu semangat dengan karya nya
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:32 ص Delete
Asli gk bohong puisinya bagus
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:33 ص Delete
DEMI WOY INI CANTIK BGGGTTTTTTT
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:33 ص Delete
Tewrus semangat ya sayang
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:34 ص Delete
happy weekend dyan
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:34 ص Delete
Kuliah wooeee
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EH GILS BAGUS PISAN KARYA PUISINYA
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:35 ص Delete
goodluck sistur
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:35 ص Delete
Jangan terlalu insecure yg lain, kamu udah bekerja keras
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KAK BENERAN INI MAH KECE ABIS PARAH
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SLALU BERJUANG CYINTAKU
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Good awesome
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JANGAN LUPA BERDOA CANTIK
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Apapun hasilnya jangan bersedih
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:38 ص Delete
Yo dyan go go!
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:39 ص Delete
indahnya ide ini. i like it
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:39 ص Delete
smg sukses slalu
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FIGHTING KAK
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pokoknya harus bikin puisi buat gw
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:41 ص Delete
Karyamu benar-benar membuatku terharu
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:42 ص Delete
Execellent!
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KEWREN PARRAAAHHH
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komentar banyak gak ada yg muk mutual? hhhhhhh
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HARUS MENANG YAN
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hayuk lanjutin karya selanjutnya
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GAASSSIN TEROOOSS DY JAN MAU KALAH
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:46 ص Delete
great :)
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Lainkali promote sampe ke penjuru nasional
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mantep hwhwhw
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WOUW BERPENGALAMAN BANGET NULISNYA
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Dengan ini menyatakan puisimu indah, cantik, gemilang. Ditunggu karya selanjutnya
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Sangat profesional bund
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Coba nanti bikin pantun dyy
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HAYOOOKKK LANJUTIN BERKOMENTAR GAIS
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Sungpah deh ini klo gk menang jan nyesel
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Dyaannnn temanku harus semangat
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the best lh
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Nice bhahahaha
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LANJUTKEUN NAK KARYA KARYAMU
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this is beautifully poetry
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:54 ص Delete
Jan terlena dengan tugas coolyeah
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:54 ص Delete
Berkarya boleh, sombong jangan yan. Keren
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:55 ص Delete
up smpe ribuan gengs
Rin 30‏/3‏/2021، 8:56 ص Delete
So beautiful! Have a good luck♥️
bebebe 30‏/3‏/2021، 9:10 ص Delete
woahh, i like it!
design cv 30‏/3‏/2021، 9:14 ص Delete
love this poetry♥️
design cv 30‏/3‏/2021، 9:15 ص Delete
love this poetry♥️
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 9:29 ص Delete
Woww, nice poetry
Keren kak, semangat nulisnya –!
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 9:29 ص Delete
أزال المؤلف هذا التعليق.
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 9:30 ص Delete
أزال المؤلف هذا التعليق.
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 9:49 ص Delete
omg this is beautiful !! good luck yaa
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 9:57 ص Delete
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POETRYYYY🥺
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:10 ص Delete
Wah keren bangett ✨✨
unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:15 ص Delete
keren kak, sukses terus yaa ^^
Aisha Safrianty 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:24 ص Delete
Keren sekali puisinya! Bagusss bangett🥺🥺 Good luck yaa❤
aksaratata 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:24 ص Delete
its amazingg ⛵
Creator 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:37 ص Delete
Wahhh bagus banget puisinya, terus berkarya ya kakk,
غير معرف 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:41 ص Delete
KERENNN!!!
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:43 ص Delete
What a good poem!! Kata2nya bagus bangett ☺️☺️👍🏼👍🏼
Pb 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:43 ص Delete
Keren bangetttt, lanjutankan terusss ya buat karya yang Lainnya, semangatttt💞😁
Pb 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:43 ص Delete
Keren bangetttt, lanjutankan terusss ya buat karya yang Lainnya, semangatttt💞😁
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:53 ص Delete
semangat!!!
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:53 ص Delete
IH KEREN BANGET KAKAAKKK
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:54 ص Delete
KEEEREEENNN GOOD
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:54 ص Delete
mantaps djiwa
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yuk semangat jan mau kalah dong frens
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:56 ص Delete
serius ini bagus kak
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ADEK GWE MANTUL EUY
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:57 ص Delete
GENGS BANTU ADEK GWE DISINI NTAR DAPET BENGBENG
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 10:58 ص Delete
boleh dong menang, ni puisi terssuliiittt
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HAYU SEMANGAT YUK
Auliya adms 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:00 ص Delete
keren banget, semangat terus kak! ✨🌺
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:01 ص Delete
DYAN SEMANGAT ATUH
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SEMANGAT TERUS KE KOREA YUKS
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:02 ص Delete
ni puisi pasti pusing bikinnya yan
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:03 ص Delete
Mantul pisan ih, urang teh teu bisa bikin diksi sebagus ini
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:04 ص Delete
Menang atau kalah harus suportif dong
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WOW DAEBAK HEOL MANTEP
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BAGUS BANGET AAA PUISINYA KAK
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AKU PADAMU DYAN
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semangat yo
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:07 ص Delete
DYANKU SEMANGAT SYG
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:08 ص Delete
kuliah neng, puisi mulu
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:09 ص Delete
demi dah yan, loe tuh mantul anaknya
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:09 ص Delete
WOAH, I LIKE YOUR POETRY
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HWAITING DEK
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:11 ص Delete
keren bgt hiks :'(
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:11 ص Delete
aku tunggu pengumuman nya yan. semoga sukses
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:13 ص Delete
semangat seyeng. luv u!
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:16 ص Delete
dddyyyaaan keren woe puisimu
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:16 ص Delete
Terus berkarya ye, gw dukung
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:17 ص Delete
i really like your poetry. pesannya terlalu mendalam, keren
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:18 ص Delete
it's a great
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:18 ص Delete
keren unch :<
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:19 ص Delete
Asyik pisan diksinya, bangga deh
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:20 ص Delete
My favorite's your poetry. Sp so nice!
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:21 ص Delete
DYAN KULIAH
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:22 ص Delete
so amazed
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:22 ص Delete
heemmm, cara merangkai katanya the best
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:23 ص Delete
TEROSKAN PROMOTMU NAK
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:24 ص Delete
up dipaksa komen. semangat frin
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GOKIL PARAH ISINYA
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smgts kak
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xixixi dh gue komen
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wiiidddiih gua nak
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:27 ص Delete
AMAZING.
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Love your poetry
Unknown 30‏/3‏/2021، 11:28 ص Delete
hahahaahaha keren cuy
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Dih ko bisa sih puisinya gini
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Patut diteladani, daebak
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dpt feelnya ye bun
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wow i'm crying
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bingung gue komen apa nih