THE GREEN WILLOW By: Dyan Ratna Hayuningtyas (Finalis LCP Batch 3)

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Amidst this neverending winter,

The glorious realms of mine in shatter,

The flimsy glee hath slivered for thee,

O’ love, you slaughtered all souls in me,

Thy reaped the paint into pieces beneath wintry river,

Thereafter you conquered me to surrender,

I whined and whined within excruciating queer,

I wept and wept, I suffered upon a woe that queer,

From the tense of frozen moon, I remained in silent,

Night by night, I pondered of you that now in Aidenn,

This soul and flesh hath fainted down a dread remorse,

That may corrupt and destroy all blood of me in worse,

O’ dear, I was possessed by the miserable gloom,

That restrained the green willows around to bloom,

After thee, my love and my heart of life, gone forever,

I seized alone this sweet grief of agony upon my shoulder.


Cibinong, December 12th, 2021



Author Biodata

Dyan Ratna Hayuningtyas is a student from the University of Yogyakarta. Writing is her hobby, she started writing as early as in her middle school age. Her house is located in Nirwana Estate’s Street RR No. 9, Cibinong, Bogor. Her acquaintances called her by Dyan on daily basis. Dyan can be reached through email tyashoka@gmail.com, Whatsapp 085772044572 or Instagram @tyasoka.

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such a beautiful poetry<33
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Good luck!
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6 words for you "So amazing poetry, successful for you"
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bagus bangett😍😍
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bagus puisinya, pemilihan katanya juga bagus. semangat yaaa tetap berkarya dan moga menang, amiinnn
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such a great poem! Good luck
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keren🥺semangat❤️
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wow keren bgtt pemilihan katanya
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Kerenn
Hanida's blog 31‏/3‏/2021، 9:38 م Delete
this was really touched my heart ... you're a great writer indeed. semangaat! 🤍
Unknown 31‏/3‏/2021، 10:21 م Delete
kakaknya keren banget. semoga menang yah
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Pemilihan katanya mantul, mantep bener
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HAYUK SEMANGAT DUNGS
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Wew, so fantastic. Luv ur poetry!
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hey you, fighting!
Unknown 31‏/3‏/2021، 10:29 م Delete
Serius kak, ini bagus bgttt puisinya. Asli ga boong
J 1‏/4‏/2021، 8:53 ص Delete
kereeen!! fighting ^^
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Semoga menang ya semangattt
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great poetry! love how ur choose the words. beautiful
Your Supporter 1‏/4‏/2021، 10:34 ص Delete
Amazinggg. Good luck!!
alaiasw 1‏/4‏/2021، 10:57 ص Delete
keren bangett... keep up the good work!!
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 11:52 ص Delete
tetap semangat yaa
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Terbaik banget puisinya mantap
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 11:53 ص Delete
Ih keren banget puisinya ka, semoga menang ya...
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 11:54 ص Delete
semangat terus kamu!
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 11:54 ص Delete
Ayo pasti bisa, jangan mau kalah!
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Lop u
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Woah keren sekali dik
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Aku baca puisimu enjoy, Mantul bangett
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Doa yang terbaik untukmu <3
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 11:57 ص Delete
Harus menang ya kak. Udah keren banget ini puisi
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 11:58 ص Delete
ayok semangat hayuu
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 11:59 ص Delete
Apapun yang kamu lakukan, tetap terbaik
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SEMANGAT SAYANG
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good luck
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 12:01 م Delete
Nah gini dong bagus puisinya. Lanjutkan terus berkarya :>
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 12:02 م Delete
Execelent ur poetry. Woah
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KEEREEENNN BANGET KAK ASLI PUISI TERMANTEP
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 12:03 م Delete
Yuk semangat dungs
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 12:04 م Delete
I'll keep supporting u. Fighting beybih
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smgt
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klesi bgt
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Its goneeee. So amazed
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SEMANGAT CINTAAHHH
Unknown 1‏/4‏/2021، 12:07 م Delete
sist keren sangat
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Good