HILANGNYA PERMATA Oleh : Rosaliamega (Peserta LCP 5)

Updated: 04 Agu, 2021 • 118 • min read

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HILANGNYA PERMATA

Oleh : Rosaliamega

Diselimuti kesunyian serta kebisuan

Meninggalkan luka pedih dalam hati

Suitan burung telah menyadarkanku pada

kenyataan pahit dalam hidup

Senyum setiap pagi yang kulihat, kini hanya angan

Tuhan menyayanginya lebih dari padaku

Salam rindu dariku, ku salurkan melalui doa

Bahagia disana permataku

Tegal, 29 Juli 2020

118 komentar

Unknown 06/08/21, 09.45 Delete

Kerennn semangat ocakkku!

Unknown 06/08/21, 10.15 Delete

Permata yang hilang
Berdoalah karena kekuatan doa mampu menguatkan segalanya dan memdekatkan kita pada sang pencipta

Unknown 06/08/21, 10.21 Delete

Semangat terus berusaha dan berdoa pasti bisa

rindu kumara 06/08/21, 13.04 Delete

good job oca

PuputYlyaa 06/08/21, 14.22 Delete

Kerenn!good luck oca

matchalatte 06/08/21, 15.09 Delete

wou nice^^

Unknown 06/08/21, 15.35 Delete

Awesome

Unknown 06/08/21, 17.18 Delete

Nice oca. Semangat terus

Dilaaaaaa 06/08/21, 17.27 Delete

Bagusss ca,, semangat semangat

Unknown 06/08/21, 17.28 Delete

Good luck oca

Unknown 06/08/21, 17.37 Delete

Ocaa cammtikk siapa yang punya??

Unknown 06/08/21, 17.51 Delete

Bagusss, Semangat ocaa!

Unknown 06/08/21, 17.56 Delete

Good ocaa!!

Closedz 06/08/21, 18.00 Delete

Bagus sekali��

Unknown 06/08/21, 18.15 Delete

Awesome caa

Unknown 06/08/21, 18.19 Delete

Best sekali

Unknown 06/08/21, 18.20 Delete

Very nice

Ivany Ardany 06/08/21, 18.29 Delete

Maa syaa Allah nice teh ochakkk✨

Denevan 06/08/21, 18.31 Delete

Good luck Ka oca>.<

Lale Desi 06/08/21, 19.04 Delete

Semangat

Yuni 06/08/21, 19.09 Delete

Good, semangat kak

Unknown 06/08/21, 19.34 Delete

Best banget maknanya teh

Easy English 06/08/21, 19.38 Delete

Nice.. Fighting ocakk!!

Unknown 06/08/21, 19.44 Delete

Keren!

Nisa Roikhul Wardah 06/08/21, 19.46 Delete

Semangat kak😊

Unknown 06/08/21, 19.55 Delete

Dalem banget isinya, semangat kak oca

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Mantap oca

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Terharu banget semangat teh ocakk

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semangat oca, ini keren bgt

Unknown 06/08/21, 20.05 Delete

good job ocaa!!!

Himawari AP 06/08/21, 20.10 Delete

Semangat kaa

Hanif Nur Rohmah 06/08/21, 20.22 Delete

Semangat berproses:)

Cakrawala Media 06/08/21, 20.37 Delete

Bagus kak. Semangat terus bikin puisinya.

Unknown 06/08/21, 20.43 Delete

Bagus banget kak

Sajak senja 06/08/21, 20.46 Delete

Bagus semangat untuk terus berkarya

Unknown 06/08/21, 20.48 Delete

Best banget kak puisinya, semangat selalu

Unknown 06/08/21, 20.54 Delete

Nice kak good luck

Unknown 06/08/21, 20.58 Delete

Kerennn ocaakkkk!!! Semangaatt

Keseruan 06/08/21, 21.18 Delete

Bagus banget,,, Terus berkarya ya :)

Unknown 06/08/21, 21.31 Delete

oca keren bgtt

Unknown 06/08/21, 21.31 Delete

kerennn!!!

indri Nissa 06/08/21, 22.02 Delete

Semangat ca'o

NIKA RAHAYU 06/08/21, 22.06 Delete

puisi yg indah..
moga bisa menginspirasi..
tetap berkarya..
moga bisa jd juara..👌😍

Unknown 06/08/21, 22.29 Delete

Kerenn caaa good luck ocaa

Mifa rajab alzahran 06/08/21, 22.59 Delete

Kuncinya satu....
Keikhlasan, good chao

Angel 06/08/21, 23.20 Delete

😍😍😍😍

Angel 06/08/21, 23.20 Delete

😍😍😍😍

Angel 06/08/21, 23.20 Delete

😍😍😍😍

Sistem Informasi manajemen 06/08/21, 23.57 Delete

Mantap

Unknown 07/08/21, 00.01 Delete

MasyaAllah teh indah sekali

Unknown 07/08/21, 00.03 Delete

Sukakk bangett ca, this is very nice

Unknown 07/08/21, 00.06 Delete

Keren bgt caa, love banyak banyakk buat ocak

Lilis Puji Astuti 07/08/21, 06.30 Delete

Bagus dan menyentuh hati.
Sukses selalu dalam berkarya.

Unknown 07/08/21, 07.43 Delete

SEMANGAT KAK OCA

Unknown 07/08/21, 08.00 Delete

Keren banget kak oca

Unknown 07/08/21, 08.02 Delete

Semangat selalu dalam berkarya ya kak
Always sukak sama karya nya

Serlina Amanda 07/08/21, 08.06 Delete

Keren kak

Jodohmu 07/08/21, 09.14 Delete

Kerennn

Unknown 07/08/21, 09.40 Delete

Nice kak oca

Unknown 07/08/21, 09.40 Delete

Good job teh ocaakku

Prenita 07/08/21, 09.44 Delete

Masyaallah Tabarakallah �� keren!!!

Prenita 07/08/21, 09.44 Delete

Masyaallah Tabarakallah �� keren!!!

Prenita 07/08/21, 09.44 Delete

Masyaallah Tabarakallah �� keren!!!

Maldini 07/08/21, 10.31 Delete

nice👍

Anti Ernawati 07/08/21, 11.43 Delete

So nice, bukan sosis ya good luck oca✨✨

Unknown 07/08/21, 12.00 Delete

Wih keren nih

Anonymous 07/08/21, 12.09 Delete

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

😺m 07/08/21, 12.16 Delete

Keren👍

Unknown 07/08/21, 12.18 Delete

Ocaaa ini tu keren bangett

Unknown 07/08/21, 12.19 Delete

Masyaallah teh ocaa bagusss banget

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Wooooowwww ocaaaakkkk

Unknown 07/08/21, 12.25 Delete

Aww bagus banget. SEMANGAT OCAA'

Unknown 07/08/21, 22.37 Delete

Semangattt ocaaa initu bagus bangett

Unknown 08/08/21, 08.23 Delete

yayy semangat ocaaaak

Unknown 08/08/21, 08.23 Delete

maknanya dlm bgt yup

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ocaaaak keren bgtt sie

Unknown 08/08/21, 08.24 Delete

yukkk mangatts

Syarifah 08/08/21, 13.51 Delete

Semangatt🎉

Unknown 08/08/21, 22.08 Delete

Deep banget isi nya

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Keren banget kak, semangat!!

Unknown 09/08/21, 10.13 Delete

Bagus bgt kata katanya😍

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Bagus bgt kata katanya😍

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Sangat berkesan🤗

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Mantap

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Kerenn

Aisha Fabella 09/08/21, 10.55 Delete

Semangat menuju keabadian

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Pertama, saya mengapresiasi Rosa karena telah berani mengangkat dan menuliskan wujud tema ini.
Kedua, dari segi penggunaan kata agaknya cukup klise, ya. Sehingga saya sebagai pembaca sedikit bosan padahal baru membaca 2 baris.
Ketiga, saran saya lebih diperluas lagi diksinya dan pemadanan katanya, ka. Supaya makin caur lagi karyanya!

Itu aja dari saya yang juga masih belajar menulis,tetap berkarya!

Unknown 09/08/21, 11.24 Delete

Semangat berkarya terus ya kak

Unknown 09/08/21, 11.33 Delete

Nice kak ocaa

Unknown 09/08/21, 11.33 Delete

Masyaallah teh ocaaa.. bagus banget

Curts Chay 09/08/21, 11.42 Delete

Wahh... Keren-keren

Unknown 09/08/21, 11.47 Delete

Good job kak

Unknown 09/08/21, 11.47 Delete

Awesome kakkk

Unknown 09/08/21, 11.48 Delete

Woah kereenn kak!! Mangatsss

Unknown 09/08/21, 15.06 Delete

Kerennn
Semangat yaa:3

Unknown 09/08/21, 18.42 Delete

Semangat yah kak bagus banget tuhh kak

Unknown 09/08/21, 18.52 Delete

Kerenn banget tehh

Unknown 09/08/21, 18.54 Delete

Best banget isinya ochaaaa,semangat!

Unknown 09/08/21, 18.55 Delete

Semangat ya kak gd luck

Unknown 09/08/21, 18.59 Delete

U must belajar ikhlas, Tuhan tau kamu mampu. Semangat, tetap berkarya selalu.. U best!!!

Unknown 09/08/21, 19.10 Delete

Bagus sekali kak, keren kak, tetap semangat 💪💪

Unknown 09/08/21, 19.14 Delete

Nice kak

Unknown 09/08/21, 19.17 Delete

Wooooowwwww ocaaaaaaaa!!! Kerenn abissss goodluck caaoooo

Bayu 09/08/21, 19.28 Delete

Bagusss banget ocak, gud luck yaa

Unknown 11/08/21, 07.45 Delete

puisi nya ngepas di hati. ...cha

Unknown 11/08/21, 09.39 Delete

Kereeeennn >_<

Unknown 11/08/21, 09.42 Delete

Bagus ,semangat selalu

Unknown 11/08/21, 09.53 Delete

Wahh hebat,semangat yaa!!

kemudian 11/08/21, 10.00 Delete

AAAAKKK KEREN KAAA, SEMANGAT YAAA^^

Unknown 11/08/21, 10.01 Delete

great! good luck..

fajarmarsiswantoBlog 14/08/21, 09.24 Delete

woww very nice kak edukasi banget

Unknown 14/08/21, 09.44 Delete

Good👍

Unknown 14/08/21, 09.47 Delete

Baguus bangett, semangatt

Unknown 14/08/21, 09.52 Delete

Keren🔥
Tetap semangat

Ayo Membaca 14/08/21, 09.59 Delete

Wahh keren dan tetap semangatt berkaryaaa yaaa

Putri Persada Pertiwi 14/08/21, 10.03 Delete

Keren banget nih 😎

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Kerenn bangett, semangatt ocaa!! ✨🤍🙌

elysia blogger 14/08/21, 14.34 Delete

Nice👍