HILANGNYA PERMATA Oleh : Rosaliamega (Peserta LCP 5)

Updated: 04 أغسطس, 2021 • 118 • min read

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HILANGNYA PERMATA

Oleh : Rosaliamega

Diselimuti kesunyian serta kebisuan

Meninggalkan luka pedih dalam hati

Suitan burung telah menyadarkanku pada

kenyataan pahit dalam hidup

Senyum setiap pagi yang kulihat, kini hanya angan

Tuhan menyayanginya lebih dari padaku

Salam rindu dariku, ku salurkan melalui doa

Bahagia disana permataku

Tegal, 29 Juli 2020

118 تعليقًا

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 9:45 ص Delete

Kerennn semangat ocakkku!

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 10:15 ص Delete

Permata yang hilang
Berdoalah karena kekuatan doa mampu menguatkan segalanya dan memdekatkan kita pada sang pencipta

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 10:21 ص Delete

Semangat terus berusaha dan berdoa pasti bisa

rindu kumara 6‏/8‏/2021، 1:04 م Delete

good job oca

PuputYlyaa 6‏/8‏/2021، 2:22 م Delete

Kerenn!good luck oca

matchalatte 6‏/8‏/2021، 3:09 م Delete

wou nice^^

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 3:35 م Delete

Awesome

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 5:18 م Delete

Nice oca. Semangat terus

Dilaaaaaa 6‏/8‏/2021، 5:27 م Delete

Bagusss ca,, semangat semangat

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 5:28 م Delete

Good luck oca

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 5:37 م Delete

Ocaa cammtikk siapa yang punya??

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 5:51 م Delete

Bagusss, Semangat ocaa!

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 5:56 م Delete

Good ocaa!!

Closedz 6‏/8‏/2021، 6:00 م Delete

Bagus sekali��

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 6:15 م Delete

Awesome caa

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 6:19 م Delete

Best sekali

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 6:20 م Delete

Very nice

Ivany Ardany 6‏/8‏/2021، 6:29 م Delete

Maa syaa Allah nice teh ochakkk✨

Denevan 6‏/8‏/2021، 6:31 م Delete

Good luck Ka oca>.<

Lale Desi 6‏/8‏/2021، 7:04 م Delete

Semangat

Yuni 6‏/8‏/2021، 7:09 م Delete

Good, semangat kak

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 7:34 م Delete

Best banget maknanya teh

Easy English 6‏/8‏/2021، 7:38 م Delete

Nice.. Fighting ocakk!!

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 7:44 م Delete

Keren!

Nisa Roikhul Wardah 6‏/8‏/2021، 7:46 م Delete

Semangat kak😊

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 7:55 م Delete

Dalem banget isinya, semangat kak oca

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:01 م Delete

Mantap oca

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:03 م Delete

Terharu banget semangat teh ocakk

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:04 م Delete

semangat oca, ini keren bgt

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:05 م Delete

good job ocaa!!!

Himawari AP 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:10 م Delete

Semangat kaa

Hanif Nur Rohmah 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:22 م Delete

Semangat berproses:)

Cakrawala Media 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:37 م Delete

Bagus kak. Semangat terus bikin puisinya.

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:43 م Delete

Bagus banget kak

Sajak senja 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:46 م Delete

Bagus semangat untuk terus berkarya

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:48 م Delete

Best banget kak puisinya, semangat selalu

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:54 م Delete

Nice kak good luck

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 8:58 م Delete

Kerennn ocaakkkk!!! Semangaatt

Keseruan 6‏/8‏/2021، 9:18 م Delete

Bagus banget,,, Terus berkarya ya :)

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 9:31 م Delete

oca keren bgtt

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 9:31 م Delete

kerennn!!!

indri Nissa 6‏/8‏/2021، 10:02 م Delete

Semangat ca'o

NIKA RAHAYU 6‏/8‏/2021، 10:06 م Delete

puisi yg indah..
moga bisa menginspirasi..
tetap berkarya..
moga bisa jd juara..👌😍

Unknown 6‏/8‏/2021، 10:29 م Delete

Kerenn caaa good luck ocaa

Mifa rajab alzahran 6‏/8‏/2021، 10:59 م Delete

Kuncinya satu....
Keikhlasan, good chao

Angel 6‏/8‏/2021، 11:20 م Delete

😍😍😍😍

Angel 6‏/8‏/2021، 11:20 م Delete

😍😍😍😍

Angel 6‏/8‏/2021، 11:20 م Delete

😍😍😍😍

Sistem Informasi manajemen 6‏/8‏/2021، 11:57 م Delete

Mantap

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:01 ص Delete

MasyaAllah teh indah sekali

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:03 ص Delete

Sukakk bangett ca, this is very nice

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:06 ص Delete

Keren bgt caa, love banyak banyakk buat ocak

Lilis Puji Astuti 7‏/8‏/2021، 6:30 ص Delete

Bagus dan menyentuh hati.
Sukses selalu dalam berkarya.

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 7:43 ص Delete

SEMANGAT KAK OCA

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 8:00 ص Delete

Keren banget kak oca

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 8:02 ص Delete

Semangat selalu dalam berkarya ya kak
Always sukak sama karya nya

Serlina Amanda 7‏/8‏/2021، 8:06 ص Delete

Keren kak

Jodohmu 7‏/8‏/2021، 9:14 ص Delete

Kerennn

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 9:40 ص Delete

Nice kak oca

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 9:40 ص Delete

Good job teh ocaakku

Prenita 7‏/8‏/2021، 9:44 ص Delete

Masyaallah Tabarakallah �� keren!!!

Prenita 7‏/8‏/2021، 9:44 ص Delete

Masyaallah Tabarakallah �� keren!!!

Prenita 7‏/8‏/2021، 9:44 ص Delete

Masyaallah Tabarakallah �� keren!!!

Maldini 7‏/8‏/2021، 10:31 ص Delete

nice👍

Anti Ernawati 7‏/8‏/2021، 11:43 ص Delete

So nice, bukan sosis ya good luck oca✨✨

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:00 م Delete

Wih keren nih

Anonymous 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:09 م Delete

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

😺m 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:16 م Delete

Keren👍

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:18 م Delete

Ocaaa ini tu keren bangett

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:19 م Delete

Masyaallah teh ocaa bagusss banget

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:21 م Delete

Wooooowwww ocaaaakkkk

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 12:25 م Delete

Aww bagus banget. SEMANGAT OCAA'

Unknown 7‏/8‏/2021، 10:37 م Delete

Semangattt ocaaa initu bagus bangett

Unknown 8‏/8‏/2021، 8:23 ص Delete

yayy semangat ocaaaak

Unknown 8‏/8‏/2021، 8:23 ص Delete

maknanya dlm bgt yup

Unknown 8‏/8‏/2021، 8:23 ص Delete

ocaaaak keren bgtt sie

Unknown 8‏/8‏/2021، 8:24 ص Delete

yukkk mangatts

Syarifah 8‏/8‏/2021، 1:51 م Delete

Semangatt🎉

Unknown 8‏/8‏/2021، 10:08 م Delete

Deep banget isi nya

Unknown 8‏/8‏/2021، 10:09 م Delete

Keren banget kak, semangat!!

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 10:13 ص Delete

Bagus bgt kata katanya😍

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 10:14 ص Delete

Bagus bgt kata katanya😍

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 10:39 ص Delete

Sangat berkesan🤗

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 10:42 ص Delete

Mantap

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 10:45 ص Delete

Kerenn

Aisha Fabella 9‏/8‏/2021، 10:55 ص Delete

Semangat menuju keabadian

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 11:11 ص Delete

Pertama, saya mengapresiasi Rosa karena telah berani mengangkat dan menuliskan wujud tema ini.
Kedua, dari segi penggunaan kata agaknya cukup klise, ya. Sehingga saya sebagai pembaca sedikit bosan padahal baru membaca 2 baris.
Ketiga, saran saya lebih diperluas lagi diksinya dan pemadanan katanya, ka. Supaya makin caur lagi karyanya!

Itu aja dari saya yang juga masih belajar menulis,tetap berkarya!

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 11:24 ص Delete

Semangat berkarya terus ya kak

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 11:33 ص Delete

Nice kak ocaa

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 11:33 ص Delete

Masyaallah teh ocaaa.. bagus banget

Curts Chay 9‏/8‏/2021، 11:42 ص Delete

Wahh... Keren-keren

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 11:47 ص Delete

Good job kak

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 11:47 ص Delete

Awesome kakkk

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 11:48 ص Delete

Woah kereenn kak!! Mangatsss

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 3:06 م Delete

Kerennn
Semangat yaa:3

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 6:42 م Delete

Semangat yah kak bagus banget tuhh kak

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 6:52 م Delete

Kerenn banget tehh

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 6:54 م Delete

Best banget isinya ochaaaa,semangat!

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 6:55 م Delete

Semangat ya kak gd luck

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 6:59 م Delete

U must belajar ikhlas, Tuhan tau kamu mampu. Semangat, tetap berkarya selalu.. U best!!!

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 7:10 م Delete

Bagus sekali kak, keren kak, tetap semangat 💪💪

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 7:14 م Delete

Nice kak

Unknown 9‏/8‏/2021، 7:17 م Delete

Wooooowwwww ocaaaaaaaa!!! Kerenn abissss goodluck caaoooo

Bayu 9‏/8‏/2021، 7:28 م Delete

Bagusss banget ocak, gud luck yaa

Unknown 11‏/8‏/2021، 7:45 ص Delete

puisi nya ngepas di hati. ...cha

Unknown 11‏/8‏/2021، 9:39 ص Delete

Kereeeennn >_<

Unknown 11‏/8‏/2021، 9:42 ص Delete

Bagus ,semangat selalu

Unknown 11‏/8‏/2021، 9:53 ص Delete

Wahh hebat,semangat yaa!!

kemudian 11‏/8‏/2021، 10:00 ص Delete

AAAAKKK KEREN KAAA, SEMANGAT YAAA^^

Unknown 11‏/8‏/2021، 10:01 ص Delete

great! good luck..

fajarmarsiswantoBlog 14‏/8‏/2021، 9:24 ص Delete

woww very nice kak edukasi banget

Unknown 14‏/8‏/2021، 9:44 ص Delete

Good👍

Unknown 14‏/8‏/2021، 9:47 ص Delete

Baguus bangett, semangatt

Unknown 14‏/8‏/2021، 9:52 ص Delete

Keren🔥
Tetap semangat

Ayo Membaca 14‏/8‏/2021، 9:59 ص Delete

Wahh keren dan tetap semangatt berkaryaaa yaaa

Putri Persada Pertiwi 14‏/8‏/2021، 10:03 ص Delete

Keren banget nih 😎

Unknown 14‏/8‏/2021، 10:05 ص Delete

Kerenn bangett, semangatt ocaa!! ✨🤍🙌

elysia blogger 14‏/8‏/2021، 2:34 م Delete

Nice👍

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