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Secangkir Kopi Bapak Karya: Vika Nooriska Melyawati (Peserta LCP 5)

Updated: 04 Agu, 2021 • 188 • min read

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Secangkir Kopi Bapak

Vika Nooriska Melyawati

Kala itu, sehimpun mega geruskan nabstala lukiskan corak-corak kelabu

Mencekak tajam pada ulu hati, yang tengah terbalut kalut dalam sarayu malang bersedu

Menyantap lenyap akan asa, lantas ambruk bahu merapuh layu, sembilu

Nampaknya semesta pun tak egah akan kepulangan pecandu kopi klasik itu

Kini pulangnya bertabur bunga yang kian pancarkan aroma raksi, menyekat hati

Menjeremba saban menuding jeda lantas kembali pada lorong saripati

Pair jantungku, tersayat sekarat perih mendada meredam andam karam

Meraja dirgantara pada pancarona sandyakala malam yang teramat temaram nan kelam

Dengan simburan bungkam, memejam tajam, merabuk jiwa si malang

Orang bilang, namanya mendiang

Kendati sepasang tungkai mungil ini tak mau pulang, hanya bersama bapak ia tenang

Terpatri pada hentak senyapan-senyapan dersik muara saujana terbendung genang, patah arang

Sekala ia tertelungkup pada tiras-tiras bentala buana, berkawan lentera

Merayap mati, terpapah lemah, tersekat dibalik seringai lukis yang kian menyambut dera

Habis digayang oleh anca-anca buas, kini batinnya lapang

Sekala, secangkir kopi kulacino itu dingin sesaat setelah bapak pulang

Sukoharjo 28 Juli 2021

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Wah bagus sekali dan sangat menarik

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Sangat bagus

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Keren

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Menarik

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Keren sekali

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Wahh bagus

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bagus banget , penggunaan katanya bener bener ngena dan indah bgt .

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kerennn👍

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Good job 👍

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Bagus banget

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Kerenn

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Menarik sekali

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Sangat begus, Kata-kata sangat menarik dan indah

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Bravo👏👏

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kerenn bagus👍👍

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Menarik dan keren

Lyy 07/08/21, 10.11 Delete

Keren👍

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Bagus sekali... Penggunaan bahasanya sangat unik, membuat pembaca ingin mencari tahu makna sebenarnya dari teks tersebut.

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daebak

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Keren dan bagus

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Keren

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Makasih semuanyaa~vika

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Keren

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Keren

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Keren sekali

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Bagus banget

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Kerenn

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Bagus banget penggunaan kata yang digunakan sangat menarik

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Bagus banget penggunaan kata yang menarik

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daebak👍

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bagus dan sangat menarik

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아이고 대박 ㅋㅋㅋ

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kerenn👍

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Daebak

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Bagus sekali puisinya, kata" nya unik, bikin penasaran , pengin tahu artinya, semangati Yasa !!! Semoga menjadi yang terbaik , sukses selalu menyertaimu

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keren

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Keren,unik,pokokny dabest lahh<3

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KERENNN!! SEMANGAT TERUS!!

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keren

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Disuru Komen disini , saya kasih bintang 5 deh pengemasan barang nya rapi dan pengantaran nya cepet banget

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keren keren

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Keren bangetttt ><

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Bagus sekali dan tetap semangat ya

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kerennn

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Keren abis

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👍

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Good 👍🏻

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Mantap

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keren

Erlangga 07/08/21, 19.32 Delete

Bagus banget, tata bahasa dan penggunaan bahasanya dikemas sangat rapi dan tepat.

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Bagus dan menarik, bikin penasaran pengin tahu artinya., Semoga menjadi yang terbaik...Aamiin

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Keren

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keren

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Bagus

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Wah sangat terinspirasi sekali

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Baguss banget

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Kerenn bgtt

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Bagus keren

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Keren

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Keren sekali

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baguss..keren sekali, penggunaan bahasanya tertata rapi👍🏻

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Keren

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Bagus sekali

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Wahh,kerenn

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Keren kak

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Bagusss

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Keren

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Bagus dan menyentuh hati

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Bagus banget👍🏻 keren

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goodjob!!!

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Mantap,👍🏻

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Wahhh... daebak
Keren

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baguss bangett, really good !!

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Wah bagus banget👍

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Kerenn

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Keren

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Wah bagus sekali

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Wah bagus sekali kak,sukses terus ya aamiin

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wah ini sangat keren, bagus

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Bagus

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bagus sekali kak, lanjut trus yaa

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Komen

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Bagus, keren

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Waw

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Amazing. Penggunaan kata kata nya sangat bagus dan menarik sehingga tak terkesan monoton

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Waw,keren

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Bagus banget mba

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wah bagus keren

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Kerinduan seorang anak akan sosok ayahnya karena semasa hidupnya iya sering minum kopi di sore hari kenangan itu tiba-tiba datang pada sang anak saat ia sedang duduk menikmati kopi.

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baguss

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Baguss banget👍

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Bagus banget

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Bagusss bngttt

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Keren banget 👍

Anonim 08/08/21, 16.10 Delete

Wooww,,, keren buangettttt

Kata²nyaa begitu indaH daN menarikk 👍👍

Deni Aditiya 08/08/21, 16.12 Delete

Sangat Bagus, Puisi "Secangkir Kopi Bapak" didalamnya memuat makna akan sosok anak yang rindu akan seorang ayah yang biasa menikmati secangkir kopi.

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Sangat bagus dan sesuai tema 😊

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Uwuuuuuuuu, bagus

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cakeeep

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Keren

Lailaa 08/08/21, 17.45 Delete

Menarik puisinya, penggunaan bahasa yang bagus serta penggunaan majas (perumpamaan) yang seperti menggambarkan keadaan sebenarnya.

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Kereeeennnnnn Bangetttt👏

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Bagus banget🔥

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mengkeren

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waw mangtap

SHALMANDA FIRDAUS RUSMAN 08/08/21, 18.22 Delete

Puisinya baguss sekalii <3

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Luar biasaa

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Good Job👍

Astri Rahmawati 09/08/21, 13.42 Delete

Puisinya bagus dan menarik,,good job👍

Indri 09/08/21, 13.43 Delete

Pemilihan kata yang indah. Saya suka

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Bagus. Ditingkatkan

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Good Job ...👍👍👍

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Puisinya menarik,, pemilihan katanya bagus
Tetap semangat dan terus berkarya👍

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Sangat bagus,

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kerenn

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Bagus... semangat terus untuk berkarya..

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Bagus, good job kak

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Puisinya bagus,

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Bagus��

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KERENNN

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KERENNN

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Baguss

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Kece

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Golden waysss

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Mantap ngabb
Good joob

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Mantap bgtt

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Baguss bgt dehh , good job

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kerenn banget,semangat berkarya terus yawww😍

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Mantap dahh

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Mantap... Tetap semangat yaw

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Keren banget, tetap semangat berkaryanya

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kereeennn, semangaatt!

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keren🥺

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keren nih, meng-kece☺🤙

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Keren banget pokoknya

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Keren.

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Keren sekali <3

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Keren vikaa👍🏻

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Good Joob

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Bagussss♡

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Nice👍

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Diksinya menarik

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Diksinya keren parahh 😭

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Puisinya bagus,menarik dan memiliki makna yang sangat dalam, mengingatkan tentang sosok ayah yang selalu kita rindukan. Good job, keren👍 Semangat terus untuk berkarya, ditunggu karya2 lainnya😁

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Kerennn

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kerenn. semangat berkarya-!!

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Mengkece

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kerennn deh👍🏻

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bagus banget kata-katanyaa

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meng waw

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keren sih ini👍

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kerennn

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Keren, semangat!!

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Keren banget sih pemilihan kata nya,good job

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kerennn🤩

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Kerenn sekalii, good job👍🏻

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Nice👍

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Wow banget sih ��

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Mantap

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omg kerenn batt!

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Bagus,sangat menarik,keren,semangat maju terus

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ihh bagus banget lohh

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Ihh like bgtt sama puisinya<3

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MANTAPU JIWA

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Diksimu dalam banget.. love it, smangatt!

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bagus bgtttt puisinyaaa

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Baguss

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Baguuss > <

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Menarik banget

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Nice

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Nice

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Ntapssssss, keren syekali

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Pemilihan kata-katanya sangat bagus dan mudah dipahami ,,, selalu semangat untuk berkarya .

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Keren . . Semoga sukses

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Baguss👍

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Wihh apikk vikkk, semangattt yaaaa

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Sangat bagus puisinya dan sangat menyentuh perasaan bagi yang membaca.
Moga tetap semangat untuk berkarya terus 👍

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👍🏻

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Parah kereennnnn🤩

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