Panorama Senja - Oleh Bagus Ariyal Fajar (Peserta LCP 10)

Updated: 15 Mar, 2022 • 58 • min read

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Panorama Senja

Oleh Bagus Ariyal Fajar

Pewana membelai selesa

Menggauli tubuhku dikala senja

Deru ombak kian mendera

Beralaskan pasir bernostalgia

Duhai tuan, sedang apa gerangan?

Duduk di pesisir sendirian

Nostalgia! aku bernostalgia

Dengan siapa?

Dengannya! dia dekat tak tampak rupa

Di sisi mana?

Bisakah kau tak lagi bertanya!

Aku menikmati nestapa

Tak usai tinta mengungkapkannya

Bisakah kau diam saja!

Perbaungan, 15 Maret 2022

58 komentar

Nurlaila Manja 17/03/22, 15.17 Delete

Makannya dalam sekali👍

Unknown 17/03/22, 15.22 Delete

Mantappp bagusss👍👍👍

Unknown 17/03/22, 15.38 Delete

Bikin puisi sambil mikirin dia ya gini

Unknown 17/03/22, 15.39 Delete

Wahhh keren parah sii inii😊👍

Febri Yanti 17/03/22, 15.54 Delete

Kerennn guss👍👍

Unknown 17/03/22, 16.04 Delete

Nyesek ga tuh 🥺

Unknown 17/03/22, 16.08 Delete

Keren lahhh👍🏻🔥

Trisnawati Zega 17/03/22, 16.12 Delete

Keren👍👍

Unknown 17/03/22, 16.13 Delete

Bikin puisi sambil mikirin doi

Unknown 17/03/22, 16.32 Delete

keren yaa baguss

Listri Amanda Putri 17/03/22, 16.43 Delete

Daebakk, keren bagusss

Unknown 17/03/22, 17.10 Delete

Widih,,bagus emang rajanya buat puisi ya keren...

Unknown 17/03/22, 17.24 Delete

Good boy yang sad boy ni wkwkwk bikin puisi dalem bgt kata katanya. Mau juga dongg dibuatin xixixi kereen nii semangat terus dalam berkarya bang

Shy 17/03/22, 17.58 Delete

Keren banget��

Yuniiiii 17/03/22, 17.58 Delete

Masya Allah keren guss

Jannah19 17/03/22, 18.09 Delete

Wahh..keren gus, lanjutkan! Teruslah berkarya��

sy.frddd 17/03/22, 18.22 Delete

MasyaAllah..kerenn!!! dalemm bgt artinya. Semangat terus bg. Semoga menanggg aaamiiin...

Dya Lim 17/03/22, 18.31 Delete

Mainnya hebat

Dian indrawan 17/03/22, 18.32 Delete

Keren gus semangat berkarya..

Unknown 17/03/22, 18.40 Delete

semangat berkarya gus 🙌

Unknown 17/03/22, 18.54 Delete

Bagus gus��
Fighting ��

Unknown 17/03/22, 18.55 Delete

Bagus gus👌
Fighting 💪

Unknown 17/03/22, 19.01 Delete

Kereeeeeen
Mantaaap

Unknown 17/03/22, 19.11 Delete

GOOD JOB GUS

SoyFikri 17/03/22, 19.12 Delete

Mantap akhi

Adriel Nicholas 17/03/22, 19.26 Delete

Bagus kali puisinya bagus. Mantap

Satria Kurniawan 17/03/22, 19.28 Delete

Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.

Lail 17/03/22, 19.28 Delete

Bagus puisinya 👍👍

Satria Kurniawan 17/03/22, 19.30 Delete

mntp kali puisi komting ku ini ah gas tros🔥

pu3de5 Hasibuan 17/03/22, 19.33 Delete

Tuan, bukan Puan ingin pergi. Hanya saja keadaan kita tak lagi sama seperti 4 tahun lalu...
Semangat Bagus! Keren sekali( ◜‿◝ )♡

Sayang 17/03/22, 19.41 Delete

Mantep guss 💪💪

Unknown 17/03/22, 20.40 Delete

Mantap Gus👍
Semangattt berkarya.

Unknown 17/03/22, 20.42 Delete

MasyaAllah luar biasa,, semangat berkarya,,

Ade 17/03/22, 20.49 Delete

Woww luar biasa, semangat berkarya

Unknown 17/03/22, 21.20 Delete

Wahhh bagusss mantap👍👍

Unknown 17/03/22, 21.34 Delete

MasyaAllah Tabarakallah semangat

Ariff 18/03/22, 07.49 Delete

AYOK PERBAUNGAN. MOGA MENANG

Unknown 18/03/22, 07.55 Delete

Puisinya bagus polll, semangat berkarya euy!!

Unknown 18/03/22, 07.59 Delete

Mantappuuuuu

Unknown 18/03/22, 08.01 Delete

semangat bang😁😁

Unknown 18/03/22, 08.04 Delete

Manteppppp

Unknown 18/03/22, 12.08 Delete

Mantap kawan👍lanjutkan karnyamu💪

Unknown 18/03/22, 14.15 Delete

Luarbiasa terus berkarya,hasilkan karya karya murni pemikiran luarbiasa seniman kata kata

Secret 18/03/22, 15.04 Delete

Bagus banget puisinya singkat tapi bermakna👍

Unknown 18/03/22, 16.13 Delete

Bagus sekali puisi yah ,di. setiap bait dan katanya terkandung makna yang tersirat dan membuat pembaca tersentuh dan berhanyal ketika membaca

Mantap ,tetaplah berkarya

Cici 18/03/22, 16.46 Delete

MasyaAllah puisi yang bagus,terhanyut dalam perasaan ��
Bait demi bait penuh dengan makna, keren banget sih ini,
sukses terus Gus��

Khairun Nisa 18/03/22, 16.47 Delete

Masya Allah keren

Unknown 18/03/22, 17.30 Delete

Keren
Semangat terus

Agus 18/03/22, 17.42 Delete

Puisi nya penuh dgan makna hidup..
Mntap

Syuwaibatul 18/03/22, 18.47 Delete

Mantap bestai semangat berkarya ☺️

Unknown 18/03/22, 19.31 Delete

Huhuhu demi apa? Tapi ini beneran kece sih. Semangat terus yaa, bang. Wkwkwk😃💪🏻

BanBan 18/03/22, 19.31 Delete

Luar biasa, penggunaan kata yang sangat indah disetiap baris nya.

Nahraazz 18/03/22, 19.37 Delete

Keren

sarah 18/03/22, 19.42 Delete

keren wihh, semangatt bagussss🤟🏻✨

Kristin Natalia Manalu 18/03/22, 20.01 Delete

Kerenn 🔥🔥🔥

Unknown 18/03/22, 23.11 Delete

MasyaAllah keren bgt, semangat berkarya 😊

Unknown 19/03/22, 08.17 Delete

Wih keren bg bagus👍

Unknown 19/03/22, 13.50 Delete

Keren bgtt