Panorama Senja - Oleh Bagus Ariyal Fajar (Peserta LCP 10)

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 Panorama Senja

Oleh Bagus Ariyal Fajar


Pewana membelai selesa

Menggauli tubuhku dikala senja

Deru ombak kian mendera

Beralaskan pasir bernostalgia

Duhai tuan, sedang apa gerangan?

Duduk di pesisir sendirian

Nostalgia! aku bernostalgia

Dengan siapa?

Dengannya! dia dekat tak tampak rupa

Di sisi mana?

Bisakah kau tak lagi bertanya!

Aku menikmati nestapa

Tak usai tinta mengungkapkannya

Bisakah kau diam saja!


Perbaungan, 15 Maret 2022

58 komentar

Nurlaila Manja 17/03/22, 15.17 Delete
Makannya dalam sekali👍
Unknown 17/03/22, 15.22 Delete
Mantappp bagusss👍👍👍
Unknown 17/03/22, 15.38 Delete
Bikin puisi sambil mikirin dia ya gini
Unknown 17/03/22, 15.39 Delete
Wahhh keren parah sii inii😊👍
Febri Yanti 17/03/22, 15.54 Delete
Kerennn guss👍👍
Unknown 17/03/22, 16.04 Delete
Nyesek ga tuh 🥺
Unknown 17/03/22, 16.08 Delete
Keren lahhh👍🏻🔥
Trisnawati Zega 17/03/22, 16.12 Delete
Keren👍👍
Unknown 17/03/22, 16.13 Delete
Bikin puisi sambil mikirin doi
Unknown 17/03/22, 16.32 Delete
keren yaa baguss
Listri Amanda Putri 17/03/22, 16.43 Delete
Daebakk, keren bagusss
Unknown 17/03/22, 17.10 Delete
Widih,,bagus emang rajanya buat puisi ya keren...
Unknown 17/03/22, 17.24 Delete
Good boy yang sad boy ni wkwkwk bikin puisi dalem bgt kata katanya. Mau juga dongg dibuatin xixixi kereen nii semangat terus dalam berkarya bang
Shy 17/03/22, 17.58 Delete
Keren banget��
Yuniiiii 17/03/22, 17.58 Delete
Masya Allah keren guss
Jannah19 17/03/22, 18.09 Delete
Wahh..keren gus, lanjutkan! Teruslah berkarya��
sy.frddd 17/03/22, 18.22 Delete
MasyaAllah..kerenn!!! dalemm bgt artinya. Semangat terus bg. Semoga menanggg aaamiiin...
Dya Lim 17/03/22, 18.31 Delete
Mainnya hebat
Dian indrawan 17/03/22, 18.32 Delete
Keren gus semangat berkarya..
Unknown 17/03/22, 18.40 Delete
semangat berkarya gus 🙌
Unknown 17/03/22, 18.54 Delete
Bagus gus��
Fighting ��
Unknown 17/03/22, 18.55 Delete
Bagus gus👌
Fighting 💪
Unknown 17/03/22, 19.01 Delete
Kereeeeeen
Mantaaap
Unknown 17/03/22, 19.11 Delete
GOOD JOB GUS
SoyFikri 17/03/22, 19.12 Delete
Mantap akhi
Adriel Nicholas 17/03/22, 19.26 Delete
Bagus kali puisinya bagus. Mantap
Satria Kurniawan 17/03/22, 19.28 Delete
Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
Lail 17/03/22, 19.28 Delete
Bagus puisinya 👍👍
Satria Kurniawan 17/03/22, 19.30 Delete
mntp kali puisi komting ku ini ah gas tros🔥
pu3de5 Hasibuan 17/03/22, 19.33 Delete
Tuan, bukan Puan ingin pergi. Hanya saja keadaan kita tak lagi sama seperti 4 tahun lalu...
Semangat Bagus! Keren sekali( ◜‿◝ )♡
Sayang 17/03/22, 19.41 Delete
Mantep guss 💪💪
Unknown 17/03/22, 20.40 Delete
Mantap Gus👍
Semangattt berkarya.
Unknown 17/03/22, 20.42 Delete
MasyaAllah luar biasa,, semangat berkarya,,
Ade 17/03/22, 20.49 Delete
Woww luar biasa, semangat berkarya
Unknown 17/03/22, 21.20 Delete
Wahhh bagusss mantap👍👍
Unknown 17/03/22, 21.34 Delete
MasyaAllah Tabarakallah semangat
Ariff 18/03/22, 07.49 Delete
AYOK PERBAUNGAN. MOGA MENANG
Unknown 18/03/22, 07.55 Delete
Puisinya bagus polll, semangat berkarya euy!!
Unknown 18/03/22, 07.59 Delete
Mantappuuuuu
Unknown 18/03/22, 08.01 Delete
semangat bang😁😁
Unknown 18/03/22, 08.04 Delete
Manteppppp
Unknown 18/03/22, 12.08 Delete
Mantap kawan👍lanjutkan karnyamu💪
Unknown 18/03/22, 14.15 Delete
Luarbiasa terus berkarya,hasilkan karya karya murni pemikiran luarbiasa seniman kata kata
Secret 18/03/22, 15.04 Delete
Bagus banget puisinya singkat tapi bermakna👍
Unknown 18/03/22, 16.13 Delete
Bagus sekali puisi yah ,di. setiap bait dan katanya terkandung makna yang tersirat dan membuat pembaca tersentuh dan berhanyal ketika membaca

Mantap ,tetaplah berkarya



Cici 18/03/22, 16.46 Delete
MasyaAllah puisi yang bagus,terhanyut dalam perasaan ��
Bait demi bait penuh dengan makna, keren banget sih ini,
sukses terus Gus��
Khairun Nisa 18/03/22, 16.47 Delete
Masya Allah keren
Unknown 18/03/22, 17.30 Delete
Keren
Semangat terus
Agus 18/03/22, 17.42 Delete
Puisi nya penuh dgan makna hidup..
Mntap
Syuwaibatul 18/03/22, 18.47 Delete
Mantap bestai semangat berkarya ☺️
Unknown 18/03/22, 19.31 Delete
Huhuhu demi apa? Tapi ini beneran kece sih. Semangat terus yaa, bang. Wkwkwk😃💪🏻
BanBan 18/03/22, 19.31 Delete
Luar biasa, penggunaan kata yang sangat indah disetiap baris nya.
Nahraazz 18/03/22, 19.37 Delete
Keren
sarah 18/03/22, 19.42 Delete
keren wihh, semangatt bagussss🤟🏻✨
Kristin Natalia Manalu 18/03/22, 20.01 Delete
Kerenn 🔥🔥🔥
Unknown 18/03/22, 23.11 Delete
MasyaAllah keren bgt, semangat berkarya 😊
Unknown 19/03/22, 08.17 Delete
Wih keren bg bagus👍
Unknown 19/03/22, 13.50 Delete
Keren bgtt