THE GREEN WILLOW By: Dyan Ratna Hayuningtyas (Finalis LCP Batch 3)

Daftar Isi

 

Amidst this neverending winter,

The glorious realms of mine in shatter,

The flimsy glee hath slivered for thee,

O’ love, you slaughtered all souls in me,

Thy reaped the paint into pieces beneath wintry river,

Thereafter you conquered me to surrender,

I whined and whined within excruciating queer,

I wept and wept, I suffered upon a woe that queer,

From the tense of frozen moon, I remained in silent,

Night by night, I pondered of you that now in Aidenn,

This soul and flesh hath fainted down a dread remorse,

That may corrupt and destroy all blood of me in worse,

O’ dear, I was possessed by the miserable gloom,

That restrained the green willows around to bloom,

After thee, my love and my heart of life, gone forever,

I seized alone this sweet grief of agony upon my shoulder.


Cibinong, December 12th, 2021



Author Biodata

Dyan Ratna Hayuningtyas is a student from the University of Yogyakarta. Writing is her hobby, she started writing as early as in her middle school age. Her house is located in Nirwana Estate’s Street RR No. 9, Cibinong, Bogor. Her acquaintances called her by Dyan on daily basis. Dyan can be reached through email tyashoka@gmail.com, Whatsapp 085772044572 or Instagram @tyasoka.

2.662 komentar

Anonim 29/03/21, 21.35 Hapus
TEMEN GUE MANTUL WEH
Anonim 29/03/21, 21.37 Hapus
uwu pisan, dalem ye bund
Anonim 29/03/21, 21.38 Hapus
pesen ayam goreng sekilo
Anonim 29/03/21, 21.48 Hapus
good job! i love it.
Tita 29/03/21, 21.48 Hapus
Keren banget🥰🥰
Unknown 29/03/21, 21.55 Hapus
keren banget, semangatt terus yaa! <3
Anonim 29/03/21, 22.00 Hapus
very good, so amazed
Anonim 29/03/21, 22.04 Hapus
Dua ringgit berapa rupiah yan ?
Unknown 29/03/21, 22.08 Hapus
soo great, bagus banget puisinya🥺
Unknown 29/03/21, 22.11 Hapus
Suka iri sama yang bisa bikin kalimat begini, karena ku masih belajar dan susah banget buat mahamin:(( good luck ka~
Unknown 29/03/21, 22.24 Hapus
BAGUS BANGETT AAAA 😭😭 PEMILIHAN DIKSI JUGA BAGUS. KEREN!
Unknown 29/03/21, 22.28 Hapus
Semangat ya kakk!!♡
Vie 29/03/21, 22.36 Hapus
Good luck bb💞💞
Anonim 29/03/21, 22.39 Hapus
fighting gurl!
Anonim 29/03/21, 22.46 Hapus
aku bingung mau komentar ka, KEREEEEEENNN ABIISSS
khofifahslmh 29/03/21, 22.53 Hapus
Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
Anonim 29/03/21, 22.53 Hapus
Teruslah bermimpi! Bahagia selalu
del 29/03/21, 22.53 Hapus
goodluck! anw ur poetry is soooooo beautiful
khofifahslmh 29/03/21, 22.54 Hapus
goodluck and fighting kakk!😍
Anonim 29/03/21, 22.56 Hapus
KAK SUMPAH BAGUS ANED
Anonim 29/03/21, 22.58 Hapus
eaea insecure baca puisinya
Anonim 29/03/21, 22.58 Hapus
semoga menang ya, aamiin
sri oktapiani 29/03/21, 23.00 Hapus
Good :)
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.01 Hapus
keren amat woy
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.01 Hapus
gk nyangka gue kreatif bgt dyan
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.02 Hapus
Berjuanglah ^_^
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.02 Hapus
tanpa kenal lelah ye yan
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.03 Hapus
Senyum dulu
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.04 Hapus
Kerupuk kerupuk
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.06 Hapus
doyoung cakep pisan sist
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.07 Hapus
puisimu sudah bagus, diksi dengan baik. terus kembangkan ide-ide kreatifmu
anonymous 29/03/21, 23.08 Hapus
cool!!!
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.08 Hapus
jan pantang menyerah sir
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.09 Hapus
Its so cool! valid no debat
Only 29/03/21, 23.10 Hapus
Diksinya keren banget...
Semangat terus, ya!
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.12 Hapus
ULER BERBISA DIATAS PUISI. BENAR-BENAR KEREN INI DIKSI
Unknown 29/03/21, 23.12 Hapus
I love your writings so much! it's so well put and neat!! the choice od diction you use in the poem are also very exquisite. the points you wanted to get across are eloquently executed! thank you for making this beautiful piece!! :D
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.13 Hapus
harus menang pokonya ye bro
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.14 Hapus
Diksi ceklis, keselarasan udh oke, ide pun patut diacungkan jempol. Mantav
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.15 Hapus
Terdiam terhanyut membaca puisi anda
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.16 Hapus
Dyan jan lupa bengbeng
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.17 Hapus
Udh gw blg lo tuh pinter berbahasa
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.19 Hapus
keep spirit!
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.20 Hapus
suer ini keren kak
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.23 Hapus
Baaaguuusss bgt. Sedi bacanya
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.23 Hapus
bobok yan, besok mulung
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.25 Hapus
Mendalami banget! Sungguh keren
minisakura 29/03/21, 23.26 Hapus
what a beautiful poetry! good luckk!!
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.26 Hapus
Congratulations sayang
Unknown 29/03/21, 23.26 Hapus
what a great poem! nicely written..💭
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.27 Hapus
heeemmm keceh badai
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.28 Hapus
Tumpengan sis
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.29 Hapus
keabisan kata-kata xixixi
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.30 Hapus
Tetap semangat ya. Teruslah berkarya, jan menyerah
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.31 Hapus
A beautifull poem! Oh my god!
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.32 Hapus
SEMANGAT SISTUUURRRR
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.32 Hapus
Bermimpilah setinggi langit, jangan melupakan doa
uknown 29/03/21, 23.33 Hapus
so awesome!😭😭😭🥺
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.34 Hapus
Puisinya mengesankan. Salut buat dyan
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.34 Hapus
Bismillahirrahmanirrahim, selalu bahagia sist
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.35 Hapus
Indah sekali puisi ini, sangat menginspirasi saya
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.37 Hapus
WOW IS A MAGIC.
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.38 Hapus
bagi-bagi tips bikin puisi hayuk
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.42 Hapus
manteeppp banget
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.43 Hapus
nggk ngerti artinya yan
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.45 Hapus
yagusti ini beneran keren kak
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.46 Hapus
Mantep benul dy
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.48 Hapus
Aku tunggu karya selanjutnya :>
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.49 Hapus
Jangan lupa senyumnya, jangan cemberut mulu
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.50 Hapus
Berkarya itu indah, seperti puisi yang sedang kubaca :(
Ay 29/03/21, 23.53 Hapus
Bagus diksinya semangat yahh semoga menang
Ay 29/03/21, 23.54 Hapus
Bagus puisinya semangat yahhh semoga mennag
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.58 Hapus
you're so talented
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.58 Hapus
Its really nice one
Anonim 29/03/21, 23.59 Hapus
So awesome!
Unknown 30/03/21, 00.01 Hapus
SEMANGAT TERUS! MAJU TERUS! JANGAN MUNDUR! JANGAN NYERAH! BERANI MENCOBA! ALRIGHT? FIGHTING
Unknown 30/03/21, 00.01 Hapus
Very sweet ❤️
Unknown 30/03/21, 08.02 Hapus
Widih dyan daebak keren banget oy
Azzahra A. 30/03/21, 08.18 Hapus
This is amazing! Keep Going, you're the best! Beautiful poetry✨
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.24 Hapus
Your poetry is beautiful
Unknown 30/03/21, 08.28 Hapus
niceee!! good luckk
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.28 Hapus
semangat semangat!
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.29 Hapus
so nice!!! good job dy
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.29 Hapus
pasti bisalaahhh menang
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.29 Hapus
Heran gw kok bisa sih bikin puisi
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.30 Hapus
nggk boleh kalah sama yg lain yan
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.30 Hapus
Banyak amat woiii
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.32 Hapus
Tetap semangat! Slalu semangat dengan karya nya
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.32 Hapus
Asli gk bohong puisinya bagus
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.33 Hapus
DEMI WOY INI CANTIK BGGGTTTTTTT
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.33 Hapus
Tewrus semangat ya sayang
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.34 Hapus
happy weekend dyan
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.34 Hapus
Kuliah wooeee
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.34 Hapus
EH GILS BAGUS PISAN KARYA PUISINYA
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.35 Hapus
goodluck sistur
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.35 Hapus
Jangan terlalu insecure yg lain, kamu udah bekerja keras
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.35 Hapus
KAK BENERAN INI MAH KECE ABIS PARAH
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.36 Hapus
SLALU BERJUANG CYINTAKU
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.37 Hapus
Good awesome
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.37 Hapus
JANGAN LUPA BERDOA CANTIK
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.37 Hapus
Apapun hasilnya jangan bersedih
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.38 Hapus
Yo dyan go go!
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.39 Hapus
indahnya ide ini. i like it
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.39 Hapus
smg sukses slalu
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.39 Hapus
FIGHTING KAK
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.40 Hapus
pokoknya harus bikin puisi buat gw
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.41 Hapus
Karyamu benar-benar membuatku terharu
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.42 Hapus
Execellent!
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.42 Hapus
KEWREN PARRAAAHHH
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.43 Hapus
komentar banyak gak ada yg muk mutual? hhhhhhh
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.43 Hapus
HARUS MENANG YAN
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.44 Hapus
hayuk lanjutin karya selanjutnya
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.45 Hapus
GAASSSIN TEROOOSS DY JAN MAU KALAH
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.46 Hapus
great :)
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.47 Hapus
Lainkali promote sampe ke penjuru nasional
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.47 Hapus
mantep hwhwhw
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.48 Hapus
WOUW BERPENGALAMAN BANGET NULISNYA
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.49 Hapus
Dengan ini menyatakan puisimu indah, cantik, gemilang. Ditunggu karya selanjutnya
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.49 Hapus
Sangat profesional bund
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.50 Hapus
Coba nanti bikin pantun dyy
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.50 Hapus
HAYOOOKKK LANJUTIN BERKOMENTAR GAIS
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.51 Hapus
Sungpah deh ini klo gk menang jan nyesel
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.52 Hapus
Dyaannnn temanku harus semangat
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.52 Hapus
the best lh
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.52 Hapus
Nice bhahahaha
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.53 Hapus
LANJUTKEUN NAK KARYA KARYAMU
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.54 Hapus
this is beautifully poetry
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.54 Hapus
Jan terlena dengan tugas coolyeah
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.54 Hapus
Berkarya boleh, sombong jangan yan. Keren
Anonim 30/03/21, 08.55 Hapus
up smpe ribuan gengs
Rin 30/03/21, 08.56 Hapus
So beautiful! Have a good luck♥️
bebebe 30/03/21, 09.10 Hapus
woahh, i like it!
design cv 30/03/21, 09.14 Hapus
love this poetry♥️
design cv 30/03/21, 09.15 Hapus
love this poetry♥️
Unknown 30/03/21, 09.29 Hapus
Woww, nice poetry
Keren kak, semangat nulisnya –!
Unknown 30/03/21, 09.29 Hapus
Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
Unknown 30/03/21, 09.30 Hapus
Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
Unknown 30/03/21, 09.49 Hapus
omg this is beautiful !! good luck yaa
Unknown 30/03/21, 09.57 Hapus
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POETRYYYY🥺
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.10 Hapus
Wah keren bangett ✨✨
unknown 30/03/21, 10.15 Hapus
keren kak, sukses terus yaa ^^
Aisha Safrianty 30/03/21, 10.24 Hapus
Keren sekali puisinya! Bagusss bangett🥺🥺 Good luck yaa❤
aksaratata 30/03/21, 10.24 Hapus
its amazingg ⛵
Creator 30/03/21, 10.37 Hapus
Wahhh bagus banget puisinya, terus berkarya ya kakk,
Anonim 30/03/21, 10.41 Hapus
KERENNN!!!
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.43 Hapus
What a good poem!! Kata2nya bagus bangett ☺️☺️👍🏼👍🏼
Pb 30/03/21, 10.43 Hapus
Keren bangetttt, lanjutankan terusss ya buat karya yang Lainnya, semangatttt💞😁
Pb 30/03/21, 10.43 Hapus
Keren bangetttt, lanjutankan terusss ya buat karya yang Lainnya, semangatttt💞😁
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.53 Hapus
semangat!!!
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.53 Hapus
IH KEREN BANGET KAKAAKKK
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.54 Hapus
KEEEREEENNN GOOD
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.54 Hapus
mantaps djiwa
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.55 Hapus
yuk semangat jan mau kalah dong frens
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.56 Hapus
serius ini bagus kak
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.56 Hapus
ADEK GWE MANTUL EUY
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.57 Hapus
GENGS BANTU ADEK GWE DISINI NTAR DAPET BENGBENG
Unknown 30/03/21, 10.58 Hapus
boleh dong menang, ni puisi terssuliiittt
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.00 Hapus
HAYU SEMANGAT YUK
Auliya adms 30/03/21, 11.00 Hapus
keren banget, semangat terus kak! ✨🌺
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.01 Hapus
DYAN SEMANGAT ATUH
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.01 Hapus
SEMANGAT TERUS KE KOREA YUKS
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.02 Hapus
ni puisi pasti pusing bikinnya yan
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.03 Hapus
Mantul pisan ih, urang teh teu bisa bikin diksi sebagus ini
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.04 Hapus
Menang atau kalah harus suportif dong
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.05 Hapus
WOW DAEBAK HEOL MANTEP
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.05 Hapus
BAGUS BANGET AAA PUISINYA KAK
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.06 Hapus
AKU PADAMU DYAN
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.07 Hapus
semangat yo
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.07 Hapus
DYANKU SEMANGAT SYG
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.08 Hapus
kuliah neng, puisi mulu
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.09 Hapus
demi dah yan, loe tuh mantul anaknya
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.09 Hapus
WOAH, I LIKE YOUR POETRY
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.10 Hapus
HWAITING DEK
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.11 Hapus
keren bgt hiks :'(
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.11 Hapus
aku tunggu pengumuman nya yan. semoga sukses
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.13 Hapus
semangat seyeng. luv u!
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.16 Hapus
dddyyyaaan keren woe puisimu
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.16 Hapus
Terus berkarya ye, gw dukung
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.17 Hapus
i really like your poetry. pesannya terlalu mendalam, keren
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.18 Hapus
it's a great
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.18 Hapus
keren unch :<
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.19 Hapus
Asyik pisan diksinya, bangga deh
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.20 Hapus
My favorite's your poetry. Sp so nice!
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.21 Hapus
DYAN KULIAH
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.22 Hapus
so amazed
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.22 Hapus
heemmm, cara merangkai katanya the best
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.23 Hapus
TEROSKAN PROMOTMU NAK
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.24 Hapus
up dipaksa komen. semangat frin
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.24 Hapus
GOKIL PARAH ISINYA
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.25 Hapus
smgts kak
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.25 Hapus
xixixi dh gue komen
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.26 Hapus
wiiidddiih gua nak
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.27 Hapus
AMAZING.
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.27 Hapus
Love your poetry
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.28 Hapus
hahahaahaha keren cuy
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.29 Hapus
Dih ko bisa sih puisinya gini
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.29 Hapus
Patut diteladani, daebak
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.30 Hapus
dpt feelnya ye bun
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.30 Hapus
wow i'm crying
Unknown 30/03/21, 11.31 Hapus
bingung gue komen apa nih