THE GREEN WILLOW By: Dyan Ratna Hayuningtyas (Finalis LCP Batch 3)

Daftar Isi

 

Amidst this neverending winter,

The glorious realms of mine in shatter,

The flimsy glee hath slivered for thee,

O’ love, you slaughtered all souls in me,

Thy reaped the paint into pieces beneath wintry river,

Thereafter you conquered me to surrender,

I whined and whined within excruciating queer,

I wept and wept, I suffered upon a woe that queer,

From the tense of frozen moon, I remained in silent,

Night by night, I pondered of you that now in Aidenn,

This soul and flesh hath fainted down a dread remorse,

That may corrupt and destroy all blood of me in worse,

O’ dear, I was possessed by the miserable gloom,

That restrained the green willows around to bloom,

After thee, my love and my heart of life, gone forever,

I seized alone this sweet grief of agony upon my shoulder.


Cibinong, December 12th, 2021



Author Biodata

Dyan Ratna Hayuningtyas is a student from the University of Yogyakarta. Writing is her hobby, she started writing as early as in her middle school age. Her house is located in Nirwana Estate’s Street RR No. 9, Cibinong, Bogor. Her acquaintances called her by Dyan on daily basis. Dyan can be reached through email tyashoka@gmail.com, Whatsapp 085772044572 or Instagram @tyasoka.

2.662 komentar

Unknown 30/03/21, 11.31 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 11.32 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 11.32 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 11.37 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 11.40 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 12.34 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 12.37 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 12.39 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 12.40 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 12.47 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 13.36 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 13.51 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.13 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.21 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.22 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.29 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.33 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.37 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.38 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.40 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.42 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.44 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.47 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.49 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.49 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.53 Hapus
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The Moon 30/03/21, 14.55 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.55 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.57 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 14.58 Hapus
but you're on to me and all over me
Unknown 30/03/21, 15.00 Hapus
you loved me cause i'm fragile
Unknown 30/03/21, 15.02 Hapus
When I thought that I was strong
Unknown 30/03/21, 15.04 Hapus
but you touch me for a little while
Unknown 30/03/21, 15.06 Hapus
and all my fragile strenght is gone
Unknown 30/03/21, 15.08 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 15.11 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 17.16 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 17.37 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 17.47 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 18.10 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 19.12 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 19.24 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 19.44 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 20.44 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 20.44 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 20.45 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 20.46 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 20.58 Hapus
unik dan indah. sangat terharu saat membaca puisi seperti ini
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Unknown 30/03/21, 21.30 Hapus
semangat berkarya terus kak, kerennn
Roseya 30/03/21, 21.45 Hapus
Good luck
Melly Nisia 30/03/21, 21.46 Hapus
Hello! I have read your poetry and it’s very comfortable to read and the emotions you put on it are very impressive! I hope you can create more amazing poetries like this in the future 💗
Princess 30/03/21, 21.48 Hapus
This poem touch me in the heart.
Unknown 30/03/21, 21.50 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 21.54 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 21.58 Hapus
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Unknown 30/03/21, 22.05 Hapus
OMO SANGAT KEREN
Unknown 30/03/21, 23.01 Hapus
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Cangcimen.com 30/03/21, 23.35 Hapus
semangat terus berkaryanyaa, puisinyaa bagusss
desa teratak air hitam 30/03/21, 23.39 Hapus
Haii baguss puisinyaa

Kalau menang kabaein yakkk
Unknown 30/03/21, 23.40 Hapus
semangat ya yann
Book(ed) Talk 30/03/21, 23.42 Hapus
What a wonderful words <3 good luck!u
Unknown 30/03/21, 23.49 Hapus
Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
Unknown 30/03/21, 23.54 Hapus
woah you already did a great job. fighting!
Unknown 31/03/21, 00.06 Hapus
semangat yah
Unknown 31/03/21, 00.08 Hapus
Keren bangett🥺
Unknown 31/03/21, 07.37 Hapus
Mantep banget hiks
giselle 31/03/21, 08.07 Hapus
kerennn kak, semangattt
Unknown 31/03/21, 08.14 Hapus
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Unknown 31/03/21, 08.16 Hapus
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Axell 31/03/21, 08.30 Hapus
woaa u r awesome, semangatt <33
aulia 31/03/21, 08.46 Hapus
Semangat kak!!
Unknown 31/03/21, 09.00 Hapus
Wahh bagus, semangatt teruss yaa
Unknown 31/03/21, 09.09 Hapus
What a beautiful!good luck!
Unknown 31/03/21, 09.16 Hapus
This is what you called poetry 😭😭😭
Unknown 31/03/21, 10.39 Hapus
such a beautiful poetry<33
Unknown 31/03/21, 13.38 Hapus
keren banget kak! semangat yaa ^^
unknown 31/03/21, 14.21 Hapus
BAGUS BANGETT!!! SEMANGAT TERUS YAAA!!! AKU DUKUNG KAMUUUU
Unknown 31/03/21, 15.22 Hapus
Good luck!
Unknown 31/03/21, 15.35 Hapus
6 words for you "So amazing poetry, successful for you"
Dina Amalia Agustina 31/03/21, 15.43 Hapus
bagus bangett😍😍
Unknown 31/03/21, 16.57 Hapus
bagus puisinya, pemilihan katanya juga bagus. semangat yaaa tetap berkarya dan moga menang, amiinnn
PIK REMAJA GEMPUR SPENTURA 31/03/21, 17.26 Hapus
such a great poem! Good luck
Tanjiro 31/03/21, 17.29 Hapus
shivering becos this is so cool!!!!! awesome 😎😎
unknown 31/03/21, 17.51 Hapus
keren🥺semangat❤️
Unknown 31/03/21, 18.00 Hapus
woah keren banget kakk , good luck ! <3
Unknown 31/03/21, 18.14 Hapus
wow keren bgtt pemilihan katanya
Unknown 31/03/21, 18.27 Hapus
Kerenn
Hanida's blog 31/03/21, 21.38 Hapus
this was really touched my heart ... you're a great writer indeed. semangaat! 🤍
Unknown 31/03/21, 22.21 Hapus
kakaknya keren banget. semoga menang yah
Unknown 31/03/21, 22.22 Hapus
Pemilihan katanya mantul, mantep bener
Unknown 31/03/21, 22.24 Hapus
HAYUK SEMANGAT DUNGS
Unknown 31/03/21, 22.25 Hapus
Wew, so fantastic. Luv ur poetry!
Unknown 31/03/21, 22.28 Hapus
hey you, fighting!
Unknown 31/03/21, 22.29 Hapus
Serius kak, ini bagus bgttt puisinya. Asli ga boong
J 01/04/21, 08.53 Hapus
kereeen!! fighting ^^
Unknown 01/04/21, 09.14 Hapus
Semoga menang ya semangattt
Unknown 01/04/21, 09.42 Hapus
great poetry! love how ur choose the words. beautiful
Your Supporter 01/04/21, 10.34 Hapus
Amazinggg. Good luck!!
alaiasw 01/04/21, 10.57 Hapus
keren bangett... keep up the good work!!
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.52 Hapus
tetap semangat yaa
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.52 Hapus
Terbaik banget puisinya mantap
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.53 Hapus
Ih keren banget puisinya ka, semoga menang ya...
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.54 Hapus
semangat terus kamu!
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.54 Hapus
Ayo pasti bisa, jangan mau kalah!
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.55 Hapus
Lop u
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.56 Hapus
Woah keren sekali dik
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.56 Hapus
Aku baca puisimu enjoy, Mantul bangett
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.57 Hapus
Doa yang terbaik untukmu <3
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.57 Hapus
Harus menang ya kak. Udah keren banget ini puisi
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.58 Hapus
ayok semangat hayuu
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.59 Hapus
Apapun yang kamu lakukan, tetap terbaik
Unknown 01/04/21, 11.59 Hapus
SEMANGAT SAYANG
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.00 Hapus
good luck
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.01 Hapus
Nah gini dong bagus puisinya. Lanjutkan terus berkarya :>
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.02 Hapus
Execelent ur poetry. Woah
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.02 Hapus
KEEREEENNN BANGET KAK ASLI PUISI TERMANTEP
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.03 Hapus
Yuk semangat dungs
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.04 Hapus
I'll keep supporting u. Fighting beybih
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.05 Hapus
smgt
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.05 Hapus
klesi bgt
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.06 Hapus
Its goneeee. So amazed
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.06 Hapus
SEMANGAT CINTAAHHH
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.07 Hapus
sist keren sangat
Unknown 01/04/21, 12.07 Hapus
Good